https://youtu.be/rlAbYk4a5i8
I received some constructive feedback on my last post. The most surprising thing to me was that people had no idea what exactly my service was, so I made sure to be more explicit in this elevator pitch as to what I am selling.
I also followed the recommendation to flip the direction of the camera to get better lighting and to include more specifics as to where and how my business will start and who it will service. I'd appreciate even more constructive feedback to make this pitch the best it can be!
Hi Brandon, you did a great job on your elevator pitch. You really improved from your previous elevator pitch. You did a great job explaining your product and explain in greater depth of what your service was. As you mentioned you were worried about the lighting and I think flipping the camera helped with that. Overall you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteHello Brandon, awesome pitch. To be completely honest you did great with the last two EP assignments. However, this time you really nailed it. This time you did an outstanding job throughly explaining what your business would hope to accomplish. Additionally, you effectively brought animation to your pitch with your use of hand gestures. Although it might not seem like a big thing, it really kept me interested throughout the whole pitch and will definitely have the same effect on others. Great work!
ReplyDeleteHey Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch and reading about the feedback that you received. You have improved your elevator pitch so much. You took the feedback from the previous elevator pitch and made this one perfect. I think this pitch was the best one you have done because you fully explained your product and what you hope to accomplish. Overall, you did a really awesome job with this blog post.